Another set of eyes. #art

My husband frequently helps me fix pieces and tells me when to move on. He also looks through my book and tells me when to revisit. While I’ve been off my day job I’ve done lots of doodles but kind of viewed them as mostly crap. He pulled out 4 pieces for me to revisit and labeled some changes for me to make. I’ve fixed one of them.
This is red panda eating ice cream.